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Title: Mornings Like This Reviewer: Poowrite Signed
Another pretty good story. I'd like to see what happens at McDonald's. I'd like to see how John would react if Delilah overestimated her ability to hold it all in :).

Author's Response: Thanks again man you can check out more of Delilah and John on my Deviantart account: Syncej
Date: Jun 25, 2014 09:43 pm [Report This]
Title: Just.....Nevermind Reviewer: Poowrite Signed
This was... really not too bad. The characters were believable. They felt pretty real. I felt like a fly on the wall in a private moment of their lives :).

The ultimate release was really nicely done, too. The onomatopoeias were pretty good ^^.

Author's Response: Thanks :)
Date: Jun 25, 2014 09:08 pm [Report This]
Title: Mornings Like This Reviewer: hcps Signed
Nice I hope we get to see what happens after the McDonalds trip

Author's Response: Thank! but sorry my man It was just a short story not releasing a part 2 or anything. Although you can check out more of theses type of stories on my Deviantart account: Syncej
Date: Jun 17, 2014 04:05 am [Report This]
Title: Just.....Nevermind Reviewer: UndeadRiot Signed
Not too bad, could use some extension, it's a little short. However, I give you a five star rating for your work. Keep it up, bro. You're doing good.

Author's Response: Its a short story so I don't mind I write on deviant so its cool. Thanks man
Date: Jun 15, 2014 07:25 pm [Report This]
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