Yes, this fic was very well done, barring the "they're/there/their" and "dicided/decided" and other errors such as that.

I particularly enjoyed the "Extra Scene" between Rakka and Reki. I thought that was the funniest sequence.

I also enjoyed the scene between Reki and Kana.  You know, I think I like Kana...  I wanna see more Kana pee desperation..  xD

 Two big thumbs-up!

 FallenStar