Reviews For Momlonde Knows Best
Awesome story. Would love to see a second chapter to this. More diaper messing, maybe face sitting, more sexual tones.
Date: Oct 05, 2016 01:40 pm [Report This]
Awesome story. Would love to see a second chapter to this. More diaper messing, maybe face sitting, more sexual tones.
Date: Oct 05, 2016 01:19 pm [Report This]
Very nice story. It was extremely descriptive and was quite interesting. Now there are some problems I should point out. You set the scene rigth, but I'm neither do I know who Rose and Roxy Lalonde are nor do I know why they were in a diaper-messing contest. Finally, I feel like the character who came in at the very end was a little try-hard. There was very less detail than your other characters. Either don't include rhe character at all or make a decent scene out of her. Obviously, these are just trivial mistakes, which can be fixed easily... So nothing really to glare at. In fact, you have better spelling and grammar then most authors here. So keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Well, this story was specifically requested by someone who already knows who Rose and Roxy are, and they asked for that ending too, so that was all out of my hands, but otherwise, thank you!
Author's Response: Well, this story was specifically requested by someone who already knows who Rose and Roxy are, and they asked for that ending too, so that was all out of my hands, but otherwise, thank you!
Date: Sep 17, 2016 11:44 pm [Report This]
I was never into diapers but i think im reconsidering.
Date: Sep 13, 2016 09:29 pm [Report This]