EY! That was such a... pun that I had to make another review.

It's really not that bad a story. The grammar and spelling is a long-time issue with your stories, so I'm sure you know that you need to work on it. I like how an entire group is girls are popping and sharing their experience, but the problem is that I've already seen stories like this before. These stories were written by you. The point is that your newer stories, although having better writing, all seem to have a similar structure. I can't say it's bad though.

Author's Response: Have multiple women going to the bathroom is kinda my thing, such as a women in each stall, sharing a toilet, or going outdoors to do their business, i will admit its not perfect and can become kinda samey, but it seems to work out for me and a few people, sorry if it doesn't... blow your mynd, (kill me) but i understand, thanks for the review