Wow. I haven't read your stories for months, but after comparing this story with your first one, you have made some serious progress. SERIOUS. You're getting really good now! Specifically, I like the approach of the story - it being a guide rather than a narrative. Still a few grammar and capitalization mistakes here and there but you really have become better. I look forward to seeing more of your stories and keep up the good work! 4 stars (I would've chosen 4.25 stars but that's not an option)

Author's Response: Glad to see you're pleased