Okay, this was much more graphical than the other story. But, with something like Code Lyoko, I can see now why only registered users are allowed to read a story like this. If any kids who are fans of Code Lyoko read this, it would outrage parents so much that there would be a freakin' world war iii going on and Code Lyoko would never see the light of day in America ever again. But, considering that I am a fan of Code Lyoko, this is quite an interesting story, even though my first reaction was "WHY?!!!" But then, I thought of the reality of it all and now I can see why Aelita would do something like this.
Chapter 1 Reviewer: EFROdian Signed
Hey, nice job, this fic was awesome! There were a few grammatical errors, but the story content more tha made up for a couple mistakes. Man, I can't help thinking that somehow, Aelita is into that kind of thing in the actual show (although we'll never know for sure). I can't help wondering if Yumi is too... although in my world, every girl'd be into that kind of thing. At any rate, Jeremie is sure in for a surprise... although I also canot help thinking that he'll like the surprise. Keep up the good work! More Yumi and Aelita fics please!
thanks for the suggestion for a new title, but once I complete a fic, I don't change the name.
Thanks for reading though ^_^
Very nice, and certainly a good continuation of my story.
I actually thought of a better name for this, Aelita's secret, you can use it if you want.