Hey, I had an idea... why don't you write a fic where Vaan wanders ahead and Penelo stays behind, on the premise of helping Ashe, but instead, wanting to humiliate her so that she's not the only one humiliated?
Instead of waiting, though, you could have Penelo force Ashe to go... Hehe.
Great fic here, though, definitely one of my favorites. ^_^
(I still like that Mia one you wrote on the FemaleDesperation website.. =P )
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I\'m glad you liked it.rnrnThat\'s not a half-bad suggestion for the ending, either. Though, I think if Penelo were going to really humilate Ashe she\'d want to force her to lose it in public.rnrnIn any case, glad you enjoyed it.rnrn(P.S. The character, Mia, from that story is based on the character Mia from Lunar: Silver Star Story. Just a lil\' trivia there, for \'ya :))