Reviews For For Jeremie
Title: For Aelita Reviewer: Duce Signed
Not bad at all, pretty good actually, though I'd liked to seen some virtual pooping on Lyoko as well.

but still the end leaves me wondering how she's going to explain to the rest of the gang, as their going to notice a return to the past.

Author's Response:

I currently have no plans for any Code Lyoko fics after this one, but I'm sure it wouldn't stop anyone else from doing pooping in Lyoko ^_^

Yanno, I never really thought about how Aelita would explain the return to that past to the others ^_^;

Date: May 01, 2008 01:34 pm [Report This]
Title: For Aelita Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed

This wasn't half bad. Though I would have liked to have seen some pooping action, it wasn't without it's 'perks'. Though I could've sworn that Sissi knew about the Super Computer at the end of the season/series, just not every little detail about it.

Anyway, hopefully we can see some virtual pooping on Lykoko. That's something I always thought be neat to see, and when you think about it..... Aelita's bowels don't have to necessarily adhere to real life rules in the Super Computer ;)....

Date: Apr 30, 2008 11:49 pm [Report This]
Title: For Yumi Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed

Pretty good, not too crazy about this sort of thing, but it's a nice change from the usual sort of story here.

Date: Nov 10, 2007 06:26 pm [Report This]
Title: For Jeremy Reviewer: Poowrite Signed
Just finished both chapters. They were really good and seemed to stick to the spirit of the show. Of course, I don't actually know much about the show.

anyway, if I were XANA, had access to Aelita's source code and wanted to groud her via embarassment I think I'd create a routine that robs her of bowel control :).

As always, great work and thanks for sharing!

Author's Response: That may work for the real world, but not in Lyoko IMO, concidering, usually, any 3d/cgi imege or vid of a body lacks any genitals or even nipples, such as say the character models of DOA (male or felame), even if you remove all there clothes, there would be nothing there, until of course you use your imagination ^_^
Date: Nov 10, 2007 01:31 pm [Report This]
Title: For Jeremy Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed

Not bad, while I'm more for the fetish side of things, this was still a pretty funny story. Kinda like those more humorous doujins where the characters seem to be aware their in a more perverted situation.

I was gonna say, this certainly couldn't fit into the continuity of the first three, but still a nice addition to the Code Lyoko stories.

 

By the way, William can talk. He's actually gotten a bit chatty as season 4 has gone on, but it's that weird distorted voice like someone possessed when he talks, and it's assumed to be nothing but XANA doing the talking with no hint of William's personality at all.



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it ^_^

From the other two sites I've posted this on both replies I've gotten ask when a sequal will be made, since people want it, I may do a part two, staring Yumi and Aelita having fun in Lyoko. It'd most likly lack a plot like this one though if I got around to doing it. 

Date: Nov 05, 2007 05:05 pm [Report This]
Title: For Jeremy Reviewer: EFROdian Signed
Damn!  This is such a good story, PLEASE continue it!  I'm a big fan of Jermemie and Aelita, or maybe even Yumi and Aelita (yay for yuri!).   I love how Aelita acts when she's embarrassed, XANA's cruel genius (I wonder what the possessed William though when he saw Aelita naked; he may be possessed, but he's still a guy), and Yumi's reaction in the end.  Y'know, I like the idea of XANA using embarrassment or "inconvenience" in order to stop Aelita from deactivating a tower or Yumi from fighting in Lyoko (let's just say that explosive diarrhea can be one of those "hindrances" I'm talking about).  Apart from some minor grammatical errors, this story was awesome.  MORE PLEASE!!! 

Author's Response:

Thx, I'm glad you liked it ^_^ 

From the 1-2 season four eps I've seen, I don't remimber the possessed William talking. I actually planned on William to play with Aelita's body when she ran behind the rock and is save before or after an orgasm, but clearly, that didn't happen. 

Date: Nov 05, 2007 04:28 am [Report This]


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