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Title: Sasami's stomach ache Reviewer: EFROdian Signed
Ah, it's about time!  As always goos story, I think Sasami is so cute!  Also, I can't wait to see what Washu's "plan" is, please continue this story arc!
Date: Dec 04, 2007 02:07 am [Report This]
Title: Sasami's stomach ache Reviewer: Poowrite Signed
Great story, as usual. I'm glad you decided to do this installment of the No Need For Desperation story.

I did notice a few grammer/spelling errors here and there (mostly missing a word like "the" and "souring" instead of "soaring" toward the beginning, as an example.)

Outside of that, it was a good addition to the plot. I'm wondering, though, what puzzle is Washu trying to solve?

Author's Response:

*Whispers* Between you and me.... >.> ........ <.<...... I don't know o_o0 I never really had much of a big revelation thought out, then again why does Washu do most of the things she does anyway? :P

Date: Nov 21, 2007 12:07 am [Report This]
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