I'm surprised I didn't review this one yet. How stupid of me. *V8 bottle whizzes past head*
Nice to see how you updated the little story and fleashed it out a bit. Though I'm curious, was this adapted from another story or something? I swear I saw something like this a long time ago on another site with different names.
Author's Response: Thanks, actually I\'m not really sure, I mean this was like one of my very first storys, maybe my second one, but I never did much with it when I first did it and it sat in a folder for a long time, but I think may have changed names and fixed it up from some idea I just happen type up, but I don\'t think I ever posted it. anyways thanks for the review. ^.^