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Title: Tina\'s Sample Project or Tina and the Clinger Reviewer: N Anonymous

Personally, I thought it was really good. You developed the characters well, and it built up very nicely. The use of language was excellent.

I did think that the scene where she lets it loose, so to speak, could use a bit more description. Overall, it was an excellent story. I enjoyed it! :)



Author's Response: Why thank you anonymous. I can see what you mean, it is only recently that I have even imagined having to describe such a thing, so I will work on it. Thanks again.
Date: Dec 24, 2007 07:14 pm [Report This]
Title: Tina\'s Sample Project or Tina and the Clinger Reviewer: Toasty Signed
Nice work! The story's set up was excellently crafted, and the characters were believable and entertaining. It's nice to have a new writing style thrown into the mix, so I hope to see more from you soon.

Author's Response: Thank you, my ego needs any bolstering it can get if I\'m going to write anymore. Thanks for the critique.
Date: Dec 19, 2007 07:12 pm [Report This]
Title: Tina\'s Sample Project or Tina and the Clinger Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed

Pretty good. A decent first effort, not trying too hard, and certainly not slacking in needed places.

Good to see a normal viewer finally pulling their own weight as well. It helps the community grow better when others throw their hat in ring instead of just the regulars.



Author's Response: Why thank you kindly.
Date: Dec 18, 2007 11:02 pm [Report This]
Title: Tina\'s Sample Project or Tina and the Clinger Reviewer: Poowrite Signed
Great debut! Here's hoping you become one of our regular contributors, you've got talent :)

I really enjoyed the story. You really did a great job capturing Tina's urgency and pacing it nicely. The character was well done, too. I didn't like her. She was mean and rude and I couldn't help but grin when she lost it. Now if only she'd been in panties ^~

I did notice a few grammer errors, but they didn't really detract much from the story.

Great job overall, I'd love to read more of your stuff~

Author's Response: Grammer, my greatest weakness! I am usually into stuff going into panties as well, I just couldn\'t resist this idea for some reason, and if I was going to write a story for this (still shocks me that I have) then it was going to be this one. But there should be more to come.
Date: Dec 18, 2007 08:17 pm [Report This]
Title: Tina\'s Sample Project or Tina and the Clinger Reviewer: yarr Signed
Welcome, and a good first addition, hope to see more!

Author's Response: Thank you, I\'ll see what I can do.
Date: Dec 18, 2007 11:41 am [Report This]
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