Title: Tina\'s Sample Project or Tina and the Clinger Reviewer: N Anonymous
Personally, I thought it was really good. You developed the characters well, and it built up very nicely. The use of language was excellent.
I did think that the scene where she lets it loose, so to speak, could use a bit more description. Overall, it was an excellent story. I enjoyed it! :)
Author's Response: Why thank you anonymous. I can see what you mean, it is only recently that I have even imagined having to describe such a thing, so I will work on it. Thanks again.
Title: Tina\'s Sample Project or Tina and the Clinger
Reviewer: Toasty Signed
Nice work! The story's set up was excellently crafted, and the characters were believable and entertaining. It's nice to have a new writing style thrown into the mix, so I hope to see more from you soon.
Author's Response: Thank you, my ego needs any bolstering it can get if I\'m going to write anymore. Thanks for the critique.
Title: Tina\'s Sample Project or Tina and the Clinger
Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed
Pretty good. A decent first effort, not trying too hard, and certainly not slacking in needed places.
Good to see a normal viewer finally pulling their own weight as well. It helps the community grow better when others throw their hat in ring instead of just the regulars.
Author's Response: Why thank you kindly.
Title: Tina\'s Sample Project or Tina and the Clinger
Reviewer: Poowrite Signed
Great debut! Here's hoping you become one of our regular contributors, you've got talent :)
I really enjoyed the story. You really did a great job capturing Tina's urgency and pacing it nicely. The character was well done, too. I didn't like her. She was mean and rude and I couldn't help but grin when she lost it. Now if only she'd been in panties ^~
I did notice a few grammer errors, but they didn't really detract much from the story.
Great job overall, I'd love to read more of your stuff~
Author's Response: Grammer, my greatest weakness! I am usually into stuff going into panties as well, I just couldn\'t resist this idea for some reason, and if I was going to write a story for this (still shocks me that I have) then it was going to be this one. But there should be more to come.
Title: Tina\'s Sample Project or Tina and the Clinger
Reviewer: yarr Signed
Welcome, and a good first addition, hope to see more!
Author's Response: Thank you, I\'ll see what I can do.