more poetic then me, nice!
Reviews For Twas Christmas Eve
Yeah, some of the rhymes were really forced, and some of them had too many syllables or too few...so what? This story was still a blast to read and it took a lot of guts to write it in this Seussian style. Keep writing creative stuff like this!
Author's Response: Yeah, on second read through I cringe at some of the... pentameter is it? Well I can always edit it later, some of them are easily fixed by removing needless language in a sentence, I just need to find a time where I\'m not as sleepy as I was when I originally wrote it (I wanted it done for christmas day and all). But thank you toasty.
Author's Response: Yeah, on second read through I cringe at some of the... pentameter is it? Well I can always edit it later, some of them are easily fixed by removing needless language in a sentence, I just need to find a time where I\'m not as sleepy as I was when I originally wrote it (I wanted it done for christmas day and all). But thank you toasty.
Date: Dec 27, 2007 01:43 am [Report This]
I will save this story and it shall replace The Night Before Christmas as the traditional Christmas story in my house.
Great job, very creative and fun to read. Here's to readin' more of your work,
Author's Response: Thank you, it is always awesome to receive compliments from good writers.
Great job, very creative and fun to read. Here's to readin' more of your work,
Author's Response: Thank you, it is always awesome to receive compliments from good writers.
Date: Dec 26, 2007 05:14 pm [Report This]
Pretty creative with the rhyming theme. While not the best, it served its purpose. Hard to say what was wrong in this, but I didn't much error.
Just remember what you don't do right and improve on those faults. Soon you'll be writing like a pro in no time.
Author's Response: Thank you Lord Orpheum. Improvement is my sole goal in writing. Well that and helping those with an otherwise \'rare\' fetish.
Date: Dec 26, 2007 02:15 am [Report This]
Heheheh, that was great! ^_^ I loved that it rhymed and the way you distribed her loss.
Author's Response: Why thank you, the frame of the incident itself had already been in my head... the rhyming was a last second idea, which is why I apologized for it.
Author's Response: Why thank you, the frame of the incident itself had already been in my head... the rhyming was a last second idea, which is why I apologized for it.
Date: Dec 25, 2007 01:09 pm [Report This]