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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed

Not bad, I wonder how come there hasn't been a picture of her yet.... or Kim Possible for that matter *is it me, or does Erin kinda look like the Cheerleader with all the moves? :P*

Can we maybe get a 'follow up' to her bladder escapades?

Author's Response:

lol at the Kim possible referance,on wikipedia, it says she looks like KP too.

I only planned a it as a single fic, others are welcome to add to it if they want.

I have seen a few Erin pics too though

Date: Dec 27, 2007 12:40 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: FallenStar Signed

Now why can't you do a good pee-desperation fic with Alex, Amy, Lynn, and Sarah? :P

Again, your biggest problem lies in your grammar usage. Nail that, and you'd be the best fic writer I personally know. ^_~

I've always liked your pee desperation fics and if you could do one where the girl is being "played" with by a man or another girl until she loses it, that'd make one HELLA AWESOME FIC! :D


Date: Dec 26, 2007 10:55 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: MMTwo Signed
Definitly a fun situation and a good story.

The present tense definitly screws with my head though.
Date: Dec 26, 2007 07:41 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Poowrite Signed
PRetty good! I always wanted to do an Erin Esurance story, but wasn't sure if it'd fit here. Maybe I'll give it a shot now.

Thanks for posting, great peeing scene!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm lglad you liked it, I've been wanting to do an Erin Esurance fic for awhile now and I finally gotten around to it. I really enjoyed typing this fic ^_^
Date: Dec 26, 2007 05:21 pm [Report This]
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