This was perhaps the first erotic fan fiction based on Bulma's adventures that I really got behind. I would've done anything to see Bulma pee her pants again, and to get both that AND her pooping in them as well was a real treat. Please continue rewriting these scenes. I bet you can even make the canon peeing scene twice as good!
Author's Response: Thanks a bunch. Call it a hunch, but I'm gathing somehow that you're a Bulma fan am I right?
She makes a good model. There are a lot of time-skips in the DB universe that can be filled in however we want :).
Thanks for the review!
Reviews For Roshi\'s Deal
Date: Nov 24, 2009 08:35 pm [Report This]
I can't wait till you get cracking on the "candy" story. BTW, in the manga, the candy is supposed to make you have a serious urge to take a crap whenever anyone whistles. Personally, I find that slightly more appealing then the anime version..
Author's Response: Thanks for the encouragement and idea. When/if I ever get around to doing a story to that, I\'ll think about using the whistle method. It would make sense, since I prefer the lavender haired Bulma drawn in the manga to the blue haired anime version.
Author's Response: Thanks for the encouragement and idea. When/if I ever get around to doing a story to that, I\'ll think about using the whistle method. It would make sense, since I prefer the lavender haired Bulma drawn in the manga to the blue haired anime version.
Date: Jan 03, 2008 03:45 pm [Report This]
Man, that's exactly what I would have asked for, except Bulma would not have gotten away so easily... I would have insisted on her eating a huge meal and then taking a whole bunch of laxatives (I'm a huge fan of explosive diarrea, especially in terms of panytpooping). Oh, well, still an extremely good fic. You should do one where Roshi gets lucky with the microband, that little gift had so much potential (shame we never got to see him use it successfully, but I'm sure he did)! Or maybe one where Oolong slips Bulma one of those special candies (it's oneof my biggest fantasies, only, for some reason, the candies are more... portent when it comes to females... say about 3 times as potent) Just some thoughts. Keep on writing!
Author's Response: I completely agree: I\'m a huge fan of explosive diarrhea. Oolong slipping Bulma one of those special candies is something I\'d like to do or see done, but haven\'t gotten around to doing anything with it yet.
Author's Response: I completely agree: I\'m a huge fan of explosive diarrhea. Oolong slipping Bulma one of those special candies is something I\'d like to do or see done, but haven\'t gotten around to doing anything with it yet.
Date: Oct 16, 2007 04:40 am [Report This]
Great story! That's a good way to get a girl to soil her panties, lol. Maybe a sequel to this one could be written, where she has to defecate while she, Goku, Yamcha, Oolong, and Pu'ar are trapped in that one room with the glass ceiling (where Goku transforms for the first time, I think), or when she's in the submarine with Goku and Krillin. Better yet, a story with Master Roshi getting lucky with the Microband. That would be cool...
It seems weird to me that Bulma would be less embarrassed about going on the ground with her vagina, anus and poop exposed. I would figure going in your panties wouldn't be as bad...
Author's Response: There are several points through the first season of Dragon Ball where there could be some panty-pooping. I\'ve thought about re-doing the wetting scene in episode one to include pooping, there\'s the fire mountain scene where Roshi could put Bulma in this situation again. I thought about doing a fear accident the first time Bulma meets Oolong and, even though there was a Interactive Story about it, I\'d really like to see what would have happend it Oolong managed to slip Bulma some of that, uh, was it \"pee pee\" candy.rnrnWell, all I can say is Bulma is weird :P. You\'re probably right, though.rnrnAnyway, thanks for the review!
Date: Oct 07, 2007 08:09 am [Report This]
Reading this excellent fic makes me want to see more of your Pan series. Get working on that!
Author's Response: One a note completely unrelated to the review: It felt really good to see that \"You have a new review\" message in my inbox :D.rnrnThanks for your compliment. Seems like I\'ve been getting several requests to finish my Pan fics recently. I\'m rolling pretty comfortably on what I\'m working on now, but I\'ll have to bump up the priority on that one.
Author's Response: One a note completely unrelated to the review: It felt really good to see that \"You have a new review\" message in my inbox :D.rnrnThanks for your compliment. Seems like I\'ve been getting several requests to finish my Pan fics recently. I\'m rolling pretty comfortably on what I\'m working on now, but I\'ll have to bump up the priority on that one.
Date: Sep 10, 2007 07:09 pm [Report This]
Always loved this one, a truly gem. Maybe you can another where she shits the bunny suit so Roshi blows out the Ox King's castle to stop the fire.
Author's Response: I like this one, too. Roshi is one of my favorite DBZ characters and I can actually see him doing something like this. I know I would.rnrnI\'ve though about doing a bunny-suit sequel. Actually, I was even going to have it in the same situation you suggested (Ox King, fire ...). I thought I\'d set it up where Bulma had to accept the laxatives to get things moving. Anyway, I\'ve obiviously put some thought into it. I just haven\'t done any writing :).
Author's Response: I like this one, too. Roshi is one of my favorite DBZ characters and I can actually see him doing something like this. I know I would.rnrnI\'ve though about doing a bunny-suit sequel. Actually, I was even going to have it in the same situation you suggested (Ox King, fire ...). I thought I\'d set it up where Bulma had to accept the laxatives to get things moving. Anyway, I\'ve obiviously put some thought into it. I just haven\'t done any writing :).
Date: Sep 09, 2007 02:21 am [Report This]