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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: fantasylover Signed
That was amazingly awesome!
Date: Oct 01, 2017 03:43 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed
Surprised you haven't already done a ton of these kind of things with Yuna and Rikku ;)
Date: Sep 15, 2010 12:49 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: FallenStar Signed

Hah! The ending was funny!

Overall a very good fic, though, personally, I would've loved it if the pressures of the girls' hands had done in their bladder controls first, but meh.. you can't have everything, they always say.

It was such a good experience to read a mostly grammatically correct fic (just a couple of typos that I saw) and YAY! For the first time, I didn't read a "there/their/they're" error.  THIS is the type of grammatically correct fic I'd love to see more often.  =)


(Now where's MY e-cookie? :P )


Author's Response: Well, if I had made them pee first, they\'d have peed all over each other\'s hands and that wouldn\'t have been very sexy :P. So, I opted for this apprach, which was still WAY different than what I had originally thought of doing.rnrnAnd, for the record, my stories contain no typos, just new ways of writing old words :).rnrnThanks fer the review!
Date: Jan 17, 2008 04:12 am [Report This]
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