Really good story. I like the part where she asks him to stay with her. I don't see much of that. One thing; it would've been nice to actually show their conversation at the end, rather than telling us about it. But hell, I can't complain.
Author's Response: I certainly have considered going back sometime and updating the story (again). But I'll have to see what mood I'm in :P
Reviews For Peepshow
Title: The peepshow Reviewer: Paytonzane Signed
Date: Aug 12, 2009 10:10 am [Report This]