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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Nia Signed
This is a good read, Egg Laying is one of my favorites, and I liked this one very much indeed, is there perhaps any more to this? I really want to read more.

Author's Response: there's currently only two chapters, but thx for reading ^_^
Date: Mar 16, 2008 05:15 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: N Signed
I'll give it a review.

Hm... the disease was a bit unbelievable, considering that keeping a pear-sized egg inside her body would seem unlikely. Rather, it would make more sense for it to be somewhat small, like normal eggs produced by humans are. However, that's not saying it can't be precious, by any means. It could, say, equal the value of diamonds.

Now, for the interesting part of the story. You did a good job at the part with the egg laying. Very believable, I could see it happen before me.

The end didn't really agree with me for some reason. It seems to just sort of cut off. I wish there'd have been some info about more "events" happening soon after, and how they became regular, or how (if?) she ever learned to control it, so she didn't need to rush out of classes.

Anyways, it was certainly a nice read! Hard to imagine for a 13-year-old, though. My mind sort of generalized it to a 16 year old, as that would fit what happened somewhat better, even though the physical features wouldn't fit.

Author's Response:

I'm happy you gave it a try and read it ^_^

There is a chapter two, I held back on posting it to see if I'd get a review, and by the sound of your review, you want to read more, if that's so, then don't worry, chapter two will be posted shortly ^_^

Date: Mar 16, 2008 01:44 am [Report This]
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