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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Calebhammond Signed
You stole this from another site. Shame on you.😔
Date: Aug 26, 2014 05:54 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: nekogirl119 Signed
OH MY GOD! this story is absolutely great! in fact this so far is the only story ive felt was good enough to give my praise too. its just fantastic the entire way through, youve got what alot of people dont have i ntheir stories, detail and masturbation, this story made me cum in mmy pants after just a few clitorous rubs from my jeans, just absolutely brilliant, i hope you take the time to write more !
Date: Jul 31, 2010 02:36 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: dragonsnake Signed
Awesome story please write more hopefully with the girls wearing jeans or long tight pants.
Date: Jul 07, 2010 03:47 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: dragonsnake Signed
I loved it and would love to read more about her in her daily dress and maybe in jeans.
Date: Jul 07, 2010 03:42 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: kira Signed
very hot and sexy
Date: Sep 22, 2009 03:03 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Jimmy Olsen Signed
I like the idea of a desperate figure skater, since I have a thing for girls with graceful bodies. Your description of Samantha is great, giving me a vivid, beautiful mental image of her. In fact, you're very attentive to detail throughout the story. Besides these plusses, there were 2 things in particular that I really liked. One was the scene where Sam confides with her friend after having a mini-accident. There aren't many comparable scenes in fics I've read. The other was the description "...squirming slightly as she fought to hold in the messy girl-mud inside of her." For some reason I just really loved that line.

Now for the inevitable minuses. You should give Sam a different last name, since Sam Beckett is the name of the hero on "Quantum Leap." But my big problem with this story was what happens after she messes herself. I find it hard to believe a girl would have an orgasm from that happening, and the part where she deliberately stimulates herself was also unbelievable as well as stomach-turning for me.
Date: Nov 08, 2008 12:28 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: kira Signed
It was really awsome
Date: May 04, 2008 07:09 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Anime Lover Signed

I also think this is pretty good ^_^

I would've loved to see how she explained it to the media as well

Date: Mar 28, 2008 11:07 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed

Pretty good, a good desperation with a messy and humiliating end. Though I do think the ending could a tad longer, just to elaborate on the aftermath of her messing.

 

Overall a great effort.

Date: Mar 25, 2008 12:51 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Poowrite Signed
Great first story, a fun little panty-pooping tale with one of the best described messings I've seen in a while. I couldn't help but feel sorry for Sam at first until she realized how her accident made her feel. I'd have liked to hear her try to explain this to the media :).

I really can't think of much to complain about. The character was fairly well described, the accident was great.

In all, very good work. Thanks for sharing.
Date: Mar 24, 2008 11:36 pm [Report This]
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