I'm glad my challenge was used, and was happy to read this. It's cool to think of Samus thinking these things, since it's all so contrary to her tough image, but it also doesn't seem out of character (as far as I know). It's a situation I can imagine Samus in, although I would have liked a little more that tied into one of the missions or planets or enemies in the games.
The stream-of-consciousness storytelling was unexpected but not bad. The only problem is that it doesn't allow for much description.
Pretty good, a nice take on the desperation angle. I liked the litttle bit of 'distractions' she has before making to the end. Though I think you should've had a scene after she peed where she realizes she really needs to poop.
Hehehe, just got out of the bathroom after peeing and suddenly having to dump really bad.
Thanks for sharing!
There were a few spelling errors in there, for exmaple :
"I'm busting." You most probably meant bursting ...
but I think you described the desperation pretty well, and all the thoughts going through her head, which is so very important on storys like these. Good job.
We need more tales of this brave woman