Wow, I really liked this one!  I got more of a "this is what she gets" feeling from this.  Of course, that may have been my own opinion of her attitude.  Still, great stuff!

I thought it was outstanding, ending included. Great job describing the desperation and I like the way the narrative was written informaly, almost like Sheri was telling the story herself.

The poop refrences the customers kept dropping made me chuckle a little and overall it was very well written.

If some of the horror stories I've been told by people who work at a certain *other* department store are any indication then I can actually almost see this happening in real life.

Great work, thanks for sharing.

Author's Response: Thank you, this nice review means a lot to me. I\'ll be sure to share more.