Reviews For A Fairies Pee
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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Jimmy Olsen Signed
I forgot to include something! I was going to request that you write a story about a human girl peeing or pooping only told from the point of view of a Fairy, to whom an ordinary human girl would be colossal and possibly dangerous.
Date: Jun 24, 2008 09:56 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Jimmy Olsen Signed
With all the stuff going on I never got around to reviewing it. I guess there's not much to say. It's a fun tale, if rather inconsequential. The ending seems kind of rushed, and just...well, strange. The misspellings aren't much of a problem except in the 2nd to last sentence, where it hinders the reader's understanding of the story. I actually puzzled over that for a while before I realized you meant Alicia wanted Fern to *smell* like grapes. Also, the title should be "A Fairy's Pee" not "A Fairies Pee."

Besides those issues, it's an enjoyable little story. ^_^
Date: Jun 24, 2008 09:53 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: piemaster Signed
cute hope you do more with the characters
Date: May 16, 2008 04:06 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Nia Signed
wow! that was a good, and funny fic! I loved it.

I love these faires. have you ever thought of doing a pooping fic with them, that would be awesome!

Author's Response: I actually considered added a little extra scene with Fern and her escape from the Stink Plant, which involved poop, I might still do it though
Date: May 12, 2008 11:30 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Duce Signed
lol, funny indeed, it was a good read, I remember reading a fic with these fairies before it was nice to read about them again.
Date: May 10, 2008 02:47 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: FallenStar Signed
Hehe, pretty funny fic. I rather enjoyed it, though I'm more of a forced pee fan, myself. I still think you need to work on your grammar, but keep plugging away and it and you'll be a great author one day. ^_^
Date: May 07, 2008 06:31 pm [Report This]
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