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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: bulmafan97 Signed
Amazing work. Not only was it extremely stimulating, but the emotions were great. I loved how Samus was more angry than anything about peeing and eventually pooping her pants. Keep up the good work, and please keep spreading your talents to cover the other girls we love.
Date: Dec 26, 2009 09:20 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Teesle Signed

Yes, that's how I think most would imagine her, a little rough I might say.

And I would not even call her bowl movement an accident, she just took everything it needed to concentrate, and I think exactly this is what makes it special . 

Date: May 21, 2008 06:01 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Poowrite Signed
I like it, too. I can't really say much for how well you got Samus, I was never a fan of Metroid and don't reall know how'd she act, I can say I enjoyed the accident scenes :).

Thanks for sharing, as always, and keep up the good work.
Date: May 21, 2008 01:28 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed

Nice! Sure don't want to be the pirates right now...

I think you got Samus pretty well, while I wouldn't know for sure how she'd take a situation like that, I do recall her being described (she's speechless in the games) as serious and not easily intimidated.

The title certainly could be better, how about "The Hunter's Folly"? Kinda has a nice ring to it, Samus is supposed to be this infamous hunter, strong and respected, and yet here she is pooping herself big time.

Anyway, keep up with the good work. If you want any suggestions for another story, it'd be awesome to see someone do one with Saya from Blood + or maybe even Nami from One Piece.

Date: May 13, 2008 12:32 am [Report This]
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