totally funny i give it 100 stars

this story is very good. i enjoyed alot and the last part about mario bring your plunger is genius

Just like Jimmy Olsen, I have a problem with this. Generally, when I read a story, I want it to be believable. Its sort of a guide for fantasies in my head. But... while making a great attempt at portraying a story focusing around Princess Peach (and a theme that I, frankly, have been wanting to see for a long time), I think that this story doesn't actually showcase Peach behaving as she would normally behave. Her actions aren't as believable as I'd like them to be, and it makes the story not as enjoyable as it could be.

Great effort, though, I do look forward to reading other stories on the same vein.

I thought it was really good. Who knew Peach had that side in her :).I'll bet having a prettyt girl poop and pee on herself at meetings would make politics a whole lot more interesting :)

Thanks for sharing.

I really hate to have to say this, since you spent so much time working on this, and obviously care very much about the Mario universe, but I really wasn't feeling this one. The description is very good. It made Peach seem real, and got me excited, but I felt like her actions were out of character. I allow for a lot of leeway when it comes to that, and enjoy man fics with that sort of believability issue, but I felt like this one went past that. Don't get me wrong, Peach acting a little naughty could be both believable and fun, but I just can't see her acting THAT naughty.

So yeah, there were some things I enjoyed here, but overall it's not what I want to read in a Peach fic. Still, I would like to read more by you set in this universe. You're a talented writer and the Mushroom Kingdom provides many interesting possibilities.