Author's Response: Still, it's nice to hear what others have to say about the fixes.
I'm certainly thinking about it, if you look at my official thread here in the forums ("Things I do..."), you can see a lovely picture of Robin getting awfully close to clogging the toilet. This has given me an idea for somethign to write, or course probably not the multi-part epic I've been trying to come up with.
Anyway, thanks for the review. It's always appreciated.
Well of course. It's a girl, on a ship full of dudes. One toilet + girl = Comedy gold! :P
I've even thought of doing a more, involved sequel story eventually, but I'll probably have to wait until I can figure out a good story.
There were a few grammer errors, blah blah. Nothing that detracted from the story. Great work :)
Gah! Damned spelling errors! Die!!!
Thanks for the review, also go and watch One Piece sometime. The first season is on DVD, the dub is by Funimation and they know their stuff.....also Nami has big tits, it's win win :P
Bit stretched? How so? If you mean over the top, it's not quite that impossible, you'd be amazed how much a person can produce depending on the time they've held it in, how much they ate and all that.
As for personality, they're meant to be a bunch of zany characters. They're not your average pirates.
Precisely, somebody sees her naked *or a gay guy who can change into other people imitates her*, she'll beat the hell out of them. Luffy needs a punch in the head, she'll clobber him to next sunday!
Some poeple I'm sure will notice the call back references to my "Indecent Proposal" series on the image site before it died.
One wonders tho, who had to clean up the stuffed toilet?
Let's just say that whoever gets that 'honor' is not gonna enjoy it one bit. As for Nami, well, she'll probably charge the guys for catching her on the pot citing 'no free show'. XP
I particulary enjoyed writing Ussop's talltale, it just seemed so much like his own.