May be fiction, but is done in a way which could conceivably be part of the actual continuum...that is, if the writers of FLCL were panty poop fetishists. Aside from that main point, I think that it's well done and can possibly seem quite consistent with the characters, except for the part where Ta-kun has the guts to move on a chick at this point in the short series (but again, it's fiction of a different fiction so it can be easily forgiven). Honestly, I can forgive any infringement on story line so long as it can justifiably be seen to fit into a character's personality, which is something I can get time and time again in your stories.Author's Response:
Well I did make it pretty clear that this wasn't meant to totally link up with the plot of the series, or at least the rest of episode 3 and on. And of course, the fetish angle was far more 'sexy/perverted romance' than how the real series might have handled such an event (let's just say that would have been a lot of bizarre 'facts' from both Haruko and Naota's dad about fetishes in japan and all that XP in manga form!)
Again, thanks for the reviews.