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Title: Ninamori and Naota; alone. Reviewer: sonic Signed
shouldve been a episode nice work
Date: Jul 18, 2009 06:36 pm [Report This]
Title: Ninamori and Naota; alone. Reviewer: jukebox Signed
May be fiction, but is done in a way which could conceivably be part of the actual continuum...that is, if the writers of FLCL were panty poop fetishists.  Aside from that main point, I think that it's well done and can possibly seem quite consistent with the characters, except for the part where Ta-kun has the guts to move on a chick at this point in the short series (but again, it's fiction of a different fiction so it can be easily forgiven).  Honestly, I can forgive any infringement on story line so long as it can justifiably be seen to fit into a character's personality, which is something I can get time and time again in your stories.

Author's Response:

Well I did make it pretty clear that this wasn't meant to totally link up with the plot of the series, or at least the rest of episode 3 and on. And of course, the fetish angle was far more 'sexy/perverted romance' than how the real series might have handled such an event (let's just say that would have been a lot of bizarre 'facts' from both Haruko and Naota's dad about fetishes in japan and all that XP in manga form!)

 

Again, thanks for the reviews.

Date: Sep 06, 2008 06:41 am [Report This]
Title: Ninamori and Naota; alone. Reviewer: yawn Signed

yeah one of my favs make more pleese thanx

 

Date: Jun 29, 2008 04:11 am [Report This]
Title: Ninamori and Naota; alone. Reviewer: S.T. the Kitsune Signed
Great story. I'm looking more into flatulence related story. Anyways great job.
Date: Oct 08, 2007 09:19 am [Report This]
Title: Ninamori and Naota; alone. Reviewer: Toasty Signed
This is one of the ones that I really missed after the first site went down. Reading it now is like seeing an old friend. Great job!
Date: Sep 10, 2007 08:02 pm [Report This]
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