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Title: Aisha destroys the toilet! Reviewer: EFROdian Signed
Great story!  I do love reading about the "larger than life" shits sometimes, and I could definitely see Aisha as having such dumps.  As always, it's a pleasure to read your work.  Please keep them coming!
Date: Nov 07, 2008 08:57 am [Report This]
Title: Aisha destroys the toilet! Reviewer: Teesle Signed
While I have not so much fun just imagining a girl having a bowel movement wort "three buckets of cow shit", I find your level of detail oddly fascinating.
Second problem here is that I don't know the character, but it was a fun read nonetheless.
Date: Jul 20, 2008 05:41 am [Report This]
Title: Aisha destroys the toilet! Reviewer: DrBones Signed
Forget the gloves and bucket, Jean is gonna need a Has.Mat suit and garbage bags to tackle that mess! Just shoot that toilet into space and buy a new one.

I've said before I love totally realistic lost episodes stories and ludicrously gratuitous mega-dumps, and you've proven your great at both Orpheum. No offense, but I thought I remembered some phrases reused from some of your old stories, but really, how many creative ways can you describe a cute girl pooping?

As for unrealistic, who's to say. That's the great thing about using alien girls for things like this. Show me a biologist who can say that Ctarl Ctarl don't have ten miles of large intestine and colons the size of elephants. In the anime we say her eat about as much as her body weight at one time, so way shouldn't the reverse be true? I have to think though, if she really held that load for two weeks her belly would have been bulging out over her skirt and she would have been farting so much that everyone else would have abandoned ship a long time ago.

Author's Response:

Quite true, now if someone could just point me to a girl who can dump that much. :D

I'll admit I do reuse some lines from older stories, though unintentionally most of the time. But hey, not a problem as long as it isn't total copy/paste :P


I like big dumps too, and sometimes the really over the top ones. Heck, I would mind seeing a story with an iconic anime girl delivering a load like you in the UWD pictures (so thick an Elephant would be a screaming murder :P) I might even try a story like that sometime, though I'll have to probably try a series that would fit with it's girls having such colossal logs.

Date: Jul 19, 2008 10:49 am [Report This]
Title: Aisha destroys the toilet! Reviewer: Poowrite Signed
"That's one big pile of shit."

Great story, man. This one was, what, 1500 words and probably 1400 of them were pooping. Can't beat that! Great work.

Author's Response:

Well of course, it's a very 'shitty' story after all :P

Glad you liked it.

Date: Jul 19, 2008 12:31 am [Report This]
Title: Aisha destroys the toilet! Reviewer: Zee_phyro Signed

There's no other words: great story! Who cares about being realistic if its about girl taking a dump, right? Just let your imagination running wild! LoL 


Date: Jul 17, 2008 05:38 am [Report This]
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