Reviews For I Dream of Pizza
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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Poowrite Signed
Heh, I liked it. I don't know the characters, but I love a girl who loves pizza and I love a girl who poops so much.

Good story, thanks for posting.
Date: Aug 22, 2008 08:57 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Jimmy Olsen Signed
I liked this, even though I don't know the characters. The banter is amusing. I was kind of hoping something would happen after C. C.'s dump to tie it in with the earlier scene, like maybe she really fell back asleep and was only using the toilet in her dream while messing Lelouche's bed in real life. But still, even though it's kind of just 3 slight scenes, it's an entertaining fic. However like Orpheum said there are some spelling errors. Twice you wrote "defiantly" when you meant "definitely."

Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it

I actually liked that suggestion about C.C. falling asleep and dreaming of using the toilet while actually messing herself on Lelouch's bed

Date: Aug 22, 2008 01:52 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed

Nice, even if the plot is pretty simplistic.

It definately serves the purpose of delivering a "CC takes a dump" scenario and nothing else, and that's fine by me.

As usual, the spelling/grammer seems a little off, but nothing too distracting, and I would have liked to have seen more 'quantity' in this epic dump, especially some more details about CC's pizza butt (which I'm sure grew three sizes that day, after all the pizza XP)

Great stuff!



Author's Response:

thanks, sometimes simple is best ^_^

I never had any good plot, so I pretty much started typing and just let the scenes flow.

I was a little wary about C.C.'s sexual suggetion to Lelouch >.<

Date: Aug 22, 2008 01:48 am [Report This]
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