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Title: Chapter 1: The Kendo Match Reviewer: Jimmy Olsen Signed
Fun story. Nothing too profound, but still entertaining, because of the action as well as the peeing.
Date: Aug 23, 2008 04:26 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: The Kendo Match Reviewer: Poowrite Signed
Yeah! Great story, nice action and a great wetting scene. I thought you nailed every personality and I was actually able to follow the kendo terms. In fact, the way it was written seemed to suggest some knowledge on the subject.

My only complaint, which isn't really much of a complaint, is I think you got the Summary wrong.

"At the last tournament, she had eaten too much. This time, she drank too much!..."

It was Satori that had eaten to much in the tourney, not Saya. I remember, because it went a long way in establishing her as one of my favorite characters :).

Still, a minor complaint to a great story. I look forward to reading more.

Author's Response: Oh, darn it. That would be my memory failing me. X_x *fixes that* I watched the series quite a while ago, but I was sure it was Sayako... Good thing the incident's in character anyway, I guess. As for kendo, I haven't ever practiced it (though I want to), but watching the series sparked an interest for it in me, and since then I've been studying the theoretic aspect of the sport. So I guess you could say I'm somewhat knowledgeable. XD
Date: Aug 22, 2008 01:56 pm [Report This]
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