Title: Winry's gift Reviewer: jukebox Signed
FMA is one of my favorite series of all time, and Winry one of my favorite female characters.  So it goes without saying that I've enjoyed these stories since I first read them quite some time ago.  The addition of some of the other characters is quite nice as well, however I feel that Riza's character would be disinclined to this fetish.  The writing is good to try and play around that, but for the Riza chapter I simply couldn't feel it too much.  Sheska is another story, though, and chapter 4 is quite enjoyable.  However, I would have to say that by far I enjoyed chapter 1 the best, and I would be overjoyed if you ever wrote anymore FMA panty poop stories, in this story series or not, with Winry as the main character.

Author's Response:

I have been thinking about another chapter, but haven't quite gotten a story into my mind just yet. Though it may just be a one-off thing (meaning it might not really be all that tied into the previous entries.) Also, I may eventually return to this series and redo them all, much like my Final Fantasy stories (which I encourage you to read.........please :P)

As for the Riza story, I tried to play on the fact that she does have a rarely seen playful side, while the lovely markswoman is always serious and hard nosed in most situations, I would think she might have something of a 'wild side'. Perhaps she wouldn't be into messing, maybe she would, you can never really tell how kinky some people are.

Thanks for the review.

Date: Sep 06, 2008 04:33 am [Report This]
Title: Sheska's bold discovery Reviewer: Toasty Signed
I'm glad you finally followed through with the promised Sheska chapter, which is probably my favorite so far. Changing up the characters keeps this series fresh, even after four installments. Good job!

P.S. fund it

Author's Response:

Better watch what you say.... If poowrite were to think you might get tired of seeing Yuna pooping... he might go crazy :P

 

3 votes for more Sheska.... guess I should consider another story with my little bookworm :)

Date: Dec 09, 2007 04:13 pm [Report This]
Title: Sheska's bold discovery Reviewer: Poowrite Signed
"Fund it!"

Great continuation to the story. I thought the masturbation was a nice touch. I mean, realistically, if she did that to turn herself on, *something* of the sorts would follow.

I don't know a whole lot about FMA, but you're setting up a world with possibilities with the characters :).

Thanks for posting!

Author's Response:

Good to know you liked it. And it's a nice change from the usual panty in a skirt *which alot of the time the stories have*

 

And I really do have to say that Sheska strikes me as the kind of gal whose very reserved, but can become wild if given the right circumstances.

Date: Dec 09, 2007 02:28 pm [Report This]
Title: Sheska's bold discovery Reviewer: DrBones Signed
"Fund it!" "Fund it!" "Fund it!" "Fund it!" "Fund it!" (one hour later...)"Fund it!"

Not too into sexualized pantie poop myself, but it was very nice to see Sheska getting in on the action.  I say, pooping fics. for all bit characters, "Fund it!"  Really, I do like the "cute-geeky glasses girl" thing a lot too.  To see Sheska on the pot in a stall in a public bathroom dropping a big, stinky load and blushing wile flipping through a thick book on her lap, "Fund it!"  "Fund it!" "Fund it!" ect.

Author's Response:

I'll admit I'm not too crazed about mastubation in a pantypoop story or just by itself, but I thought it would fit in nicely here. You do have to admit that Sheska has that 'bottled up' personality that probably would boil over into a sexual frenzy if she didn't keep herself in check. And I do have a fairly good idea for a prequel to this chapter that also features the cute bookworm. ^__^ But I must hear more "fund it!"s

Date: Dec 09, 2007 12:10 pm [Report This]
Title: Winry's gift Reviewer: Lex Signed
Really enjoyed Roy's reaction in the third chapter.  Great!
Date: Nov 29, 2007 08:50 pm [Report This]
Title: Winry's show Reviewer: Zeratha Signed

I love it!

pooping on the floor is so hot, to bad there's only few storys like that around, well any how i look forward too more nice storys about Ed and Winry. ^^ 

Date: Nov 21, 2007 07:33 pm [Report This]
Title: Winry's gift Reviewer: EFROdian Signed
You certainly have the characters from Full Metal down pat.  Plus, I also really like your description of Winry's gifts, not to mention the unusually seductive and passionate version of Hawkeye and her chemistry with Mustang (I must confess I hope to receive something similar to Winry's gift to Ed someday as well).  All in all, I enjoyed all three stories immensely.  I DEMASND MORE FULL METAL FICS!!!  Keep those stories coming!
Date: Oct 29, 2007 02:01 am [Report This]


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