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Title: CC's colossal dump Reviewer: DrBones Signed
Well technically Orpheum, Yarr is right. Giant Melina in his original fic. did take the biggest dump of all time (and probably for all time) when she filled that volcano with enough poop that in a hundred years a war will probably be fought over it as fertilizer and gunpowder ingredients. Still, half filling an outhouse and destroying a toilet in two days wile in human form still makes her a champ by any stands.

Melfina of Outlaw star could be interesting though if Ashia is the one she's basing her habits on (ie. eat the equivalent of half your body weight every day and only take a dump once a month.) I imagine a buddy session with those two in a space station ladie's room would destroy the entire plumbing system and probably force an evacuation from the toxic fumes.

As for CC, I never really got into following this show. Most of what I know about it actually comes from this site so I can't say much about the characterization, but I sure liked the main action. I did enjoy how CC stayed so casual about the whole thing, for bloating up into a farting blob, to completely destroying a bathroom. I can only imagine the smell that greeted Leleuch hours later. Forget the plumber, sounds like one of those "brick up the door and abandon the room" scenarios. If I was him, I would seriously consider putting a port-a-potty in her bedroom.

I would love to see the reaction if CC took one of these in the school bathroom with other girls around...

Author's Response:

Believe me, while CC may not be a tomboyish or unlady like in the actual series; she eats more pizza than you could ever possibly imagine. Seriously, her addiction makes my 'one large pepperoni and two slices a week' (I'm not kidding) look like a rare treat. If Malachi or Yarr's artist could make a comic based on this, it'd one of the greatest scat doujins, ever....

Date: Nov 23, 2008 08:04 pm [Report This]
Title: CC's colossal dump Reviewer: Poowrite Signed
How delightful! What an enormous dump though, wow. That couldn't have felt good coming out.

Handful of spelling errors here 'n there. Nothing serious. Good work.

Author's Response:

Well, maybe not during the dump, but after; I'd probably think pure bliss :P

Eric Cartman once said: You know that feeling you get after taking a huge dump? Awesome. XD

Anyway, thanks for the review. One of these days I need to get a new writting program with an auto proof-reader. I'm just too lazy to notice them until it's too late.

Date: Nov 19, 2008 09:43 pm [Report This]
Title: CC's colossal dump Reviewer: Anime Lover Signed
I liked this as well, the beginning reminded me of my CC poop fic. I liked the exchange between CC and Leleuch, I liked the descriptions of the pooping as well

Author's Response:

So what's not to like :P

Granted my portrails were far more humorous then spot on capture. Lelouch certainly wouldn't be that spazzy, but for the sake of such a redicolous plot it works :D

Date: Nov 14, 2008 12:30 pm [Report This]
Title: CC's colossal dump Reviewer: Zee_phyro Signed
Finally, Orpheum is back to action! Interesting pooping scene, never thought she was going to take a dump on a paper! I couldn't imagine how bad the toilet was. Last but not least..... nice story, as always!

Author's Response:

Hasn't really been that long since I last wrote something. But glad to know you liked it and were expectent of a new story from me. Let's just say if Ana Didovic pooped into a toilet and didn't flush for a week, that's what it would look like. Or, if you seen the drawn pictures with the long haired girl packing a toilet, that would be an accurate image as well. XP

I certainly think I gave CC a pretty spot on dumping session, maybe it could have been a little bigger XD XD XD

Date: Nov 13, 2008 05:10 am [Report This]
Title: CC's colossal dump Reviewer: yarr Signed
Very good. Excellent. Couple of spelling slips, but thats the only critisism I got. I was expecting her to go in the sink or some other container when her big butt choked the toilet, but a big sunday edition newspaper works too i guess, heh.

Oh and how dare you dethrone my stories as the biggest dump tales with CC cheating like that with pizza! This demands action, think I'll see what Melina is up to..

Author's Response:

Cheat? CC? Never. She just ate for a whole week, it just happened to be about 5 pizza pies every day.

I don't know if Melfina could be a big pooper, then again if no one taught her that not to overeat, she might run into some... unfortunate issues. Besides, don't you have a Sakura story to do? :P

On the topic of girls clogging up toilet with their big butts, someone should do a story with Mai Shiranui.

Date: Nov 13, 2008 04:43 am [Report This]
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