This is more a scene than a chapter. It's entertaining, but I don't really know how to review it. I wonder if Kurenai has a motive behind this, besides just being sadistic and/or insane.

I like the line "her face turned an even deeper scarlet." I notice you transferred it from the 1st chapter to this one. I also thought her cupping her panties to make walking easier was a nice touch.

I look forward to reading more. Is this going to be your entry in the contest once it's done?