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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Poowrite Signed
That was pretty entertaining. I like the way you appear to slowly be building a plot around the crossover idea.

The wetting scene was great, and I really liked the scene where she's trying to sneak to the bathroom without getting caught.

Overall, good story. I enjoyed reading it anyway.
Date: Feb 25, 2009 02:07 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed

Not bad.....

BUT I WANTED GARNET TO POOP HERSELF! >__<

:P Ok now that got that out of my system, I liked it. Certainly nice to finally see a Garnet story (I don't know why people rag on 9 so much, it was more like the classics than 7 or 8). I kinda see you might be hinting at a reason for the cross-overs rather than 'because I felt like it' Heck, you could always have it be Chrono Trigger or something *Granted that was Time Travel, not dimension/world* or maybe Kingdom Hearts *Even if Tifa's her original FF7 self and not the Radiant Gardens from KH*....

Getting back on topic XP.... Another nice story, keep up the great work.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it ^_^

And I thought about adding a reason for why characters that arn't supposed to be in x-2's world, are there.

I wanted to include it in the Vs. fic, but didn't get around to it, but this fic was a good opertunity to suggest that there's a cause for the other characters being there. Also, as suggested in the fic, the issue has already been solved/taken care of, so they just have to wait. so, the fics are 'after' the groups solves the problem.

So any future fics, the reason the other characters are there is only like, a side story. so at it's core, it is a 'becouse I felt like it' reasoning, but your not reading to find out WHY their there are you? :p

if your interested in know who curently inhabits the X-2 world in this little series, it's, AC-Cloud, AC-Tifa, AC-Yuffie; Squall, Rinoa, Selfie, Zell; Zidane, Garnet and Amarant.

Although, I didn't manage to reveal it in the fic, but since the issue was solved, it'll take time for things to balence themselves, thus, more characters can and likely will appear while others dissapear back to their original locations, so with Amerants appearance, Zidane dissappears.

So if you have suggestions on who you want to show up, Eiko maybe, or Quintis, they might appear, the only characters that can't appear are dead ones, so no Aries/Areith, sorry

Date: Feb 25, 2009 12:06 am [Report This]
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