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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Anime Lover Signed
quite nice ^_^ Etna and Flonne certainly seem to be in character
Date: Sep 25, 2011 09:44 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: EFROdian Signed
I think that this was definitely a good story.  It may have been a bit rushed, but you certainly have both Etna's and Flonne's characters down pat.  Plus, the poop scenes were more than adequately descriptive.  I also agree with you that you should revisit Etna.  All in all a fine piece of work, in my opinion.
Date: Oct 29, 2007 03:57 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed

I sure hope you do use Etna again, given the nature of the games, it'd be simple to do a story with her doing a mega ultra dump. :P

Am I right or am I right? ;)

But still an excellent story.

Date: Sep 10, 2007 11:37 pm [Report This]
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