Reviews For People in Spira Should Learn to Knock
This is an entertaining little story. You do a great job of describing a situation of utter humiliation, but then it ends abrupty. Your description of the peeing and especially the bathroom are also very fine.
Date: Aug 07, 2009 09:40 pm [Report This]
Awesome, I remember this one. Yuna bombing the toilet is great, we need more of it!
Author's Response: One can never have enough of Yuna "bombing the toilet." I only wish I could whip out a fic of her producing a load to rival some of the loads we see in your stories :). Thanks a bunch for the review.
Author's Response: One can never have enough of Yuna "bombing the toilet." I only wish I could whip out a fic of her producing a load to rival some of the loads we see in your stories :). Thanks a bunch for the review.
Date: Aug 06, 2009 09:20 am [Report This]
Wow, one of my favorite fics! This is the best Yuna's fic I've ever read.
Thanks for uploading this ^__^
Author's Response: The best Yuna fic you've ever read? Considering some of the other Yuna related master-pieces posted here that is a very high honor, indeed. I'm flattered that you enjoyed it so much. You should thank Orpheum, he's the one who took the time to request it be re-posted :). Thanks a bunch for the review.
Date: Aug 06, 2009 07:49 am [Report This]
Finally! Your catalog wouldn't be complete without this gem, much less our little 'series'.
This one will always be a classic. Though I do hope you've got some new plans for Yunie in the future.
Author's Response: Heh, I think I'd forgotten how much fun it is to get reviews :). Thanks for gettin' me to re-post this and, of course, for giving it another review. As for future plans I did have an idea, inspired by the member "desp_birgit", that features the Gullwings in a situation similar to the one we saw in "Trouble at Tenchi's." I.E. three girls, explosive diarrhea and only one easily accessable toilet :). Hopefully I'll get up off my lazy ass and get around to writing it soon. Anyway, as always, thanks for the review.
Date: Aug 06, 2009 01:53 am [Report This]