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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed
Felt like reviewing this one again. It's still very good and funny. Though I did notice a potential for even funnier scenes. You had Gohan practically grope Videl's ass to keep her from pooping more, but yet she doesn't even seem to mind it one bit. I don't know about you, but that would have been a pricless moment to either have her freak out from being molested like that, or maybe have Gohan forget what he was doing with his hands :P
Date: Aug 31, 2010 10:43 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed
You should definately do another story with Videl pooping sometime. Maybe one where she's training and she 'concentrates too hard', if you know what I mean ;)
Date: Sep 25, 2009 01:17 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: EFROdian Signed
Ah yes, the one where young love conquers all... but an ill-placed remark about the smell of Videl's poop sends an innocent Gohan flying!  A masterpiece if I do say so myself.  Glad to see it's backwhere it belongs.  Can't wait to read your newer stories!
Date: Oct 26, 2007 04:35 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Aluru Signed

An instant classic! Knowing Akira Toriyama, he could have easily created a similar story (not as graphic, though). It's unfortunate that he never did much in terms of girls pooping...

I've said this before in a review for this same story, but I like how you emphasized on the smell. I love the way girls get so embarrassed over something like that. =)

Date: Oct 07, 2007 07:40 am [Report This]
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