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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: sen Anonymous
Except it's a total fake. Now you may be wondering, who in their right might would fake a watch this obscure - a mono-pusher from 1930 that, according to most people, was made in less than ten examples? patek philippe replika 
Date: Oct 09, 2014 10:52 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: EFROdian Signed
Great use of characters, I must say that's gotta be one of your strong points... that and your pooping descriptions are always top-notch.  Hmmm... I always wondered if Aelita might be into that kinda thing (I'm still unsure of Yumi).  Hey, call me crazy, but do yout think XANA might be able to control bodily functions (he can control people's minds after all)?  If you ask me, that's be a great way to slow Aelita (no Aelita, no deactivated tower) and Yumi (she's a very skilled fighter who has beaten William several times after all ) down (I'd say Jeremie too, but he's a guy).  Just something to think about (that or Yumi getting even with Sissi after Sissi "humiliates" Yumi out of jealousy).  Anyway, keep it up!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. I really struggled with this one, didn\'t feel like I did a very good job but I\'m glad you enjoyed it.
Date: Oct 16, 2007 06:06 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed

A wonderful continuation to a great story (Yes I'm being bragging :P) and a nice blend of accident/purposeful messing.

Hopefully you'll do another one sometime, but I'd say it would best to wait until I do my sequel. That way we don't mess up someone else's established plot.



Author's Response: Thanks for the review.rnrnI don\'t expect I\'ll be doing another Lyoko fic anytime soon, so I wouldn\'t worry about me messing up the plot.rnrnThanks for the review.
Date: Sep 12, 2007 12:54 am [Report This]
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