Author's Response: this fic is actualy based on that pic
Not bad. I had wondered if someone would take that picture and make a story of it. Overall, it's faithful take, but it does seem a bit rushed. Like it could have been a bit longer and more descriptive of the desperation *like having do cute potty dances and the like* and also some spelling issues here and there. My only other problem would be the small text, then again it seems the site has been wonky about that lately, you type something in size 12 font and it comes up looking up size 8 on the site here. :P
Oh well. Great story.