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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: marader4 Signed
This is good, I've seen a comic that essentially is this from the twin's point of view. Did you get the idea there, or did they get the idea here?

Author's Response: this fic is actualy based on that pic
Date: Sep 30, 2010 09:41 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: packrat Signed
I saw this story on AGD.  I also remember the picture you got this from. (I saved it to my comp after someone translated it.)  I like how you interpreted the story of the picture and gave it from Kagami's viewpoint.  And the ending sets up for a nice sequel staring her twin. (I have no idea what her name is, but I'm assuming she's the one with a yellow headband.)  
Date: Sep 05, 2010 10:48 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed

Not bad. I had wondered if someone would take that picture and make a story of it. Overall, it's  faithful take, but it does seem a bit rushed. Like it could have been a bit longer and more descriptive of the desperation *like having do cute potty dances and the like* and also some spelling issues here and there. My only other problem would be the small text, then again it seems the site has been wonky about that lately, you type something in size 12 font and it comes up looking up size 8 on the site here. :P

Oh well. Great story.

Date: Nov 14, 2009 11:49 pm [Report This]
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