The ending to this story is, in my opinion, the best part of it. You go into a good amount of detail about the action itself and then leave the reader wondering what else is going on with the last paragraph.
That is not to say that the rest of the story is mediocre- it's actually interesting to see what kind of a spin you put on the old, "Series of Unfortunate Events," catastrophe. It does build up the story.
All in all, good show.