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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: fangthefurious Signed
chapter 2! pleaseeee :3 yoruichi needs diapered 2 3: would be so cute :D
Date: Dec 05, 2011 07:21 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Rukia Anonymous
I'd love to see this continued.
Date: Oct 19, 2011 01:39 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Cha-No-Yu Signed
It's a good story, but I don't think you described things very clearly. Especially in the battle scene it was very difficult to tell when you were talking about the vasto lorde, and when it was an adjuchas, because you never clearly stated what they looked like and what the difference was.
Date: May 08, 2010 02:28 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Jimmy Olsen Signed
This is intriguing and promising. I hope to see more. My only complaint is that there's something about the action descriptions that seems mechanical. Can't quite put my finger on it.
Date: Apr 07, 2010 11:28 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: adamb Signed
True, although it's ironic that you posted your review twice as well Orpheum!
Date: Feb 20, 2010 08:13 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed
Not bad. But I have ask, why on earth is the story posted like 5 times?! Seriously, just click the thing once and check the front page a few times. In any case, just delete the extra copies, and keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Ya i know what ur talkin about. I clicked it and some error sign came up so I clicked it again...4 times.
Date: Feb 19, 2010 12:08 am [Report This]
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