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Title: One in Perfection Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed

Very nice. Do you think there'll be more. I could sense that our little heroine was developing a bit of a fetish (at least that's how it seemed to me, heheheh).

Keep up the great work!

Date: May 21, 2010 02:26 am [Report This]
Title: Two in Harmony Reviewer: cncncn Signed
This story is great! I like the fart noises. It's also good to see a Persona 3 story (not to mention a story after the long drought). Looking forward to Chapter 2.
Date: May 20, 2010 12:22 am [Report This]
Title: Two in Harmony Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed

Very good first effort. While I'm not terribly familiar with the game, it feels like something that could have been a 'cut' scenario from the title.

Date: May 17, 2010 04:15 pm [Report This]
Title: Two in Harmony Reviewer: Toasty Signed
HWAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!

Oh man, this is so awesome! This has all of my favorite things in it...hot girls, buddy dumping and masturbating! That's the best! Please write another chapter! The quality of the writing was really good, too, especially for the first story you've posted here. Keep up the good work!
Date: May 17, 2010 10:35 am [Report This]
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