i will, but i need ideas
Ok guys. I have something to say. One, this is my FIRST story and atemot at writing a fanfiction, so thus, i suck, probally you started like me. An 2, i'm new at this, ok, lay off on me, you flamers, no FLAMES! Thank you for the constructive critiscm. Thank you to Jimmy Olsen, Poowrite, and a few others, you were my inspiration to write.
Have to agree, this is just way too short. If it's all gonna be like this, then you should just move this to the Interactive part of the site. Otherwise, this is gravely in need of fleshing out, it's just terribly brief.
that was wayyyyyyyyyy to short