Reviews For Cylinder
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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: EagleWing Signed
Quite strong of a story, nicely done.
Date: Apr 04, 2011 09:27 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Roolbar Signed
Hey, if anything? I like seeing something with a bit more of a plot to it. If you care more about the characters, after all, you care more about the goings-on involving them. :)

(I agree about scenebreaks, though.)

Author's Response: I don't understand what it is about the scene transitions that people don't like. They seem fine to me.
Date: Apr 02, 2011 10:45 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 6 Reviewer: Anime Lover Signed

Hmm, to be honest, for the length of the story, the egg scene was a pretty big let down in my opinon, it just seemed tacked on for the sake of the contest and it wasn't very long.

Also, seperating scenes would reduce confusion when the scene suddenly changes



Author's Response: The pregnancy/egg-laying plot ended up being less prominent than it was in the outline. When I went to write the whole story out, some parts got longer and longer, while the egg part stayed pretty much the same. I'm sorry to see that you were disappointed.
Date: Mar 31, 2011 05:29 pm [Report This]
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