I hope you start writing again and for future notice put all of your next stories in a flash drive

Sorry guys...part two may never come now. My computer completely destroyed itself along with my stories. Right now i'm just way to crushed to start anything so don't get your hopes up.....*sob sob sob*

what is in the "wine" anyway, laxatives, dierutics ( i think thats how you spell it)

Fantastic! I haven't played Dragon Age myself, but from what I've seen of it you nailed the characters really well. I liked the dialogue between the two, especially the unexpected reversal from Leliana! It was fun without being too unbelievable. Looking forward to part two!

Hurry and post part two! This sounds good!!!!