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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: UndeadRiot Signed
Great Story, my man. Keep up the good work. Here's a five star rating for you troubles. Not trying to be a jerk.
Date: Mar 02, 2013 11:41 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Jimmy Olsen Signed
This was fun to read. I enjoyed the various creative solutions, as well as the girls' banter, and of course the descriptions of urination. I would have liked it if the characters were differentiated more, but I realize there's only so much you can do in a single scene.
Date: Sep 19, 2011 12:51 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Radiohead540 Signed

As much as I appereciate realistic stories, yours was top-notch. It'd be really neat story if you continued it, but great in and of itself. 

Date: Sep 15, 2011 10:10 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: animewetting Signed
Excellent story, sir. Still sorta wish you'd continue it, at least to maybe some other desperate girls ahead of them in traffic, but a well-put-together story nonetheless. :)

Author's Response: Well, the challenge was for one set of girls. just becouse I answered the challenge though doesn't mean others can't do their own attempt ^_^
Date: Sep 05, 2011 08:05 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: paragon Signed

IT'S...BEAUTIFUL.

Seriously though, I think I owe you one of your requests now because that certainly went beyond anything I was expecting. Thanks for answering my challenge!



Author's Response: I'm glad you are happy with it. It's been awhile since i've done a watersports fic and I enjoyed doing this one
Date: Sep 05, 2011 05:57 am [Report This]
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