Wow. I'm liking this idea so far. Maybe the next one could be used on a group of girls al at once, eh? I'd love to see a long line of girls like this hav ing to go all at once. Maybe next time she should use it on someone who's a performer or something, or maybe a whole group of them.
Lol, Sorry. I gues I should sy I like the story, but this was an ingenious way to do this. My scenario creation juices are flowing right now.
PS- Actually, I put up a challenge similar to this, but I guess I shouldn't go around advertising that in other people's reviews. =/
Other than that, looking forward to Patty setting her classmates up for some serious humiliation.
Yeah, I think you're right. I'll make the effects vary from girl to girl. You know, time needed to take effect, the buildup of pressures, that sort of stuff.
I could say that Patty didn't really attempt to hold it in; she just wanted to see how much mess she was gonna make from the Pantsbuster 9000... But still, yeah, my first chapter was short and did seem a bit rushed. I should make the later chapters more substantial.