Reviews For Event Log #46212
Great story! I assume her zero suit doesn't have crotch zip, thus she has to take the entire thing to do #2. Also related to my other fetish, how long has she been wearing that suit? I assume it had been tightly wrapping her body for days while she sweat, slept and peed in it.
Date: Jun 28, 2019 03:40 pm [Report This]
Even if it's not completely, scientifically accurate or even entirly sophisticated for computor vocabulary, one can appreciate the brilliant illustration of the artificially inteligent computor's oblivion towards human emotions so beutifully!
Date: Apr 26, 2012 02:36 am [Report This]
Brilient!!!!!
Date: Apr 26, 2012 02:26 am [Report This]
WRITE A SEQUEL
Date: Jan 03, 2011 06:07 pm [Report This]
Well that was different. A Desp Story told in the form of a log found in the computer's memory files, hat was quite an interesting concept. I like how you have her delete he file from the system after reading. It must have been adding insult to injury to realize that the whole event had been logged into the computer, LOL.
Date: Sep 15, 2010 11:01 am [Report This]
Wow, this sure is unique! And authentic, that's exaclty how i see this thing happening (of course Samus is going to delete that particular little "accident"). I personally thought that the Power Suit somehow recycles nutrients and waste products within itself, but I like your idea a lot better. I'm just curious about what would happen if something like this happened, say, when she was fighting Ridely for example. Intersing, no?
Date: Oct 16, 2007 04:47 am [Report This]
Although I'm in favor of experimentation, I don't see this experiment as a successful one. There's a certain minimum amount of detail needed in a story for it to interest the reader, and for me this did not meet that minimum.
But I can't leave without giving you points for originality. : )
Date: Oct 15, 2007 06:04 am [Report This]
I'm normally not too into accident storys, but this was different enough that I enjoyed it. It's interesting to see a computers prespective on this kind of thing. It's good you got a copy of this before she deleted it, shame there was no video record. *Grin*
One technical note: An x-ray would have trouble showing soft tissue injurys or... other things inside a body. The Powersuit would be shiedled from any radiant energy, but an MRI type scan once she was inside and undressed could show here full bowels.
Author's Response: These are better than regular x-rays. They are...super x-rays. From space. The, uh, the Chozo made them. Or something. Yeah.
One technical note: An x-ray would have trouble showing soft tissue injurys or... other things inside a body. The Powersuit would be shiedled from any radiant energy, but an MRI type scan once she was inside and undressed could show here full bowels.
Author's Response: These are better than regular x-rays. They are...super x-rays. From space. The, uh, the Chozo made them. Or something. Yeah.
Date: Oct 07, 2007 06:49 pm [Report This]
What an interesting way of telling a story. I thought it was excuted very nicely, very similar to what a computer log of something like this might look like and the text pretty closely conveyed Samus' distress without actually being told from her point of view.
Great work.
On a side note, I've never played Metroid beyond the first one so I don't know if JUSTIN BAILEY is actually an override code in Prime, but if not bonus points for a well-placed reference :)
Author's Response: JUSTIN BAILEY was actually a code for the original NES Metroid that allowed you to play as suitless Samus. I thought it would be appropriate as the password to her ship's override.
Great work.
On a side note, I've never played Metroid beyond the first one so I don't know if JUSTIN BAILEY is actually an override code in Prime, but if not bonus points for a well-placed reference :)
Author's Response: JUSTIN BAILEY was actually a code for the original NES Metroid that allowed you to play as suitless Samus. I thought it would be appropriate as the password to her ship's override.
Date: Sep 18, 2007 12:52 pm [Report This]
hehe, that was amusing and I liked the format, bit short though
Date: Sep 18, 2007 02:46 am [Report This]
Nicely done! I liked how you made it feel like the scanner logs from the games. Though I you might want to try some more sophisticated words to make it sound more techincal like, but it's not that big a deal.
Very great and well done, a great new take on this genre of stories. :)
Maybe someone else will give this a shot, I'd love to see what other might attempt with this style.
Date: Sep 18, 2007 01:19 am [Report This]