Great work :)
Faries in a story like this is a great idea. The sex scenes were pretty good, and the whole thing was pretty funny.
Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thx for reading, I like it when I can make my fic funny ^_^
Reviews For Wing-less
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: FallenStar Signed
Hahaha... The grape sequence was GENIUS! I would NEVER have thought of that!
Hey... and it was good that I couldn't see any there/their errors either. You're definitely improving, my friend! GOOD JOB! :)
Date: Sep 19, 2007 06:08 pm [Report This]