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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Jimmy Olsen Signed
The plot is quite good, but the execution could be better.

It all goes by pretty fast. It would be easier for the reader to get into it if you wrote it in more detail, with fuller scenes and without jumping forward so often. You also switch between present and past tense, which is distracting.
Date: Jan 26, 2013 01:00 am [Report This]
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