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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: killyoself Signed
Awesome and vivid!!  more stories!
Date: Nov 27, 2013 02:14 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: thedriffer91 Signed
Wow! So I inspired you to write this?! I'll admit, I read the description, the title, and the author then just went straight to reading. I didn't notice the "P.S" note until after I read the story, which brought me an even bigger surprise! Though in many ways I sensed a lot of my, should I say, aura in your story as I read it. I reminded me of my early stories with Ying and this story of yours was well done.:) I really enjoyed it and I'm interested in seeing your future stories!

Only critiquing I could give you (If you want any that is) Is that the ending felt like it ended somewhat abruptly compared to how much set up and leading into the climax you had. Other than that, great work!
Date: Nov 25, 2013 06:51 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: bluemero Signed
Yes, good. Enjoyed it greatly, have you thought of perhaps making the next victim a hot teacher? Could be fun.
Date: Nov 23, 2013 02:57 am [Report This]
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