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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Encounter Signed

shame.

what about DearS then?

(this'd be so much easier if the site would let me send messages)



Author's Response: No I haven't read that either. You can send messages through the forum, so do that from now on please.
Date: Sep 18, 2014 06:40 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Encounter Signed
do you read Medaka Box, because my story is a buddy dump fic between her and Kikaijima

Author's Response: No I haven't read it, so I can't help you there sorry.
Date: Sep 14, 2014 04:06 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Encounter Signed

this is awesome, I love this show and you did the story so well.

 

do you take requests or story ideas?



Author's Response: Thanks! And, maybe? Feel free to send them to me, tho my writing time is somewhat limited for now.
Date: Aug 16, 2014 04:33 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Jimmy Olsen Signed
To be honest, I dislike the source material and its subject matter. Still, I read every word of your story, and enjoyed parts of it. The dump and wiping aren't long and indulgent passages, but you do describe it well. I liked the bit about the pleasure of emptiness. You seem skilled with dialog as well. Read this makes me want to read more toilet paper extortion stories (just not as intensely fetishistic as this one). I encourage you to keep writing bathroom scenes.

Author's Response: I do appreciate it. And I do have many ideas in that vein, and will write more as I find the time.
Date: Aug 16, 2014 02:03 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: ruffryder Signed
Nice story man! I watched the show and really loved how you made the verbal banter between Sena and Yozora real. I wish the dump could have been a bit longer but its whatever great story regardless.

Author's Response: This was my first story of this type, so I have much to learn. I do plan to do more with this series, since Sena is the best girl ever.
Date: Aug 04, 2014 11:39 am [Report This]
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